Don’t Damn Me!My first piece of coursework for English GCSE
Thursday, October 30th, 2008I handed this essay in a few weeks ago, as a first draft and the teacher decided that it was pretty much good to go. He said he couldn’t think of any tips to give me, to make it any better. Which either means there’s no hope, or that it was good enough for decent marks. Fingers crossed, eh? 
He did, however, insert a few arrows, for where i should sort out the paragraphing (Something i struggle with), and it did receieve the wrath of the dreaded red circle, for an incorrect use of “;” and for the word “belied.” I’m not sure why “belied” was circled, the word does exist and as it was typed, it’s not a mis-reading. I didn’t realise until i’d got home, so I’ll be sure to ask him about that in the next class. For now though, i’ve changed the word to “masked.”
Without further ado, my first essay, complete and hopefully enough to get me on my way to a pass grade: Read More »
